Five Sentence Fiction – View : The Escape

A bright sunny day and a blazing red car.

Looking for an escape, she drove fast but had to slow down time to time on the hairpin bents.

It was dizzying but not as much as the thoughts spinning inside her head.

Finally she was at the hilltop, the sea sparkling below and the salty cool breeze touching her face.

She took in the blue from the sky and the sea and let herself go, only calmness surrounded her.



P.S. I came across this on Stevie’s Words which led me to check the page that started it Lillie McFerrin Writes.

In her words – What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.


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